It's a bit basic, and the grammar could use some work, but as the description says, it's unfinished, so i wouldn't worry too much about that.
otherwise, a pretty good story for something that's unfinished (and your first game).
not too much of a fan of the required long hallway with enemy encounters, but again, it's unfinished. there probably would've been something along the way had it been finished.
plus, an arena thingy for when you've gotten all the content out of the way (minus the arena).
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It's a bit basic, and the grammar could use some work, but as the description says, it's unfinished, so i wouldn't worry too much about that.
otherwise, a pretty good story for something that's unfinished (and your first game).
not too much of a fan of the required long hallway with enemy encounters, but again, it's unfinished. there probably would've been something along the way had it been finished.
plus, an arena thingy for when you've gotten all the content out of the way (minus the arena).
This is some good criticism, i thank you for not just bashing my skull in with "bad cuz rpg maker game".
I planned alot for the story, but i might work on it overtime, it was just an experiment to see what i could manage to figure out.
as for the long hallways, i thought they were a bit.. repetitive? but i kept them until i found someone else's opinion other then mine.
I added the arena so the player could see the different characters i had planned.
bad cuz rpg maker game